Bob has to get home when it is 7:30am to get 6 hours of sleep and gets to his hard dirty job to build stuff with coal. After sleeping he has to walk to the dump with all his shiny tools to go and build with dusty coal. Then Bob has to get out his hammer and starts to smash it so it can get into ashes to get it in his fireplace for his family to enjoy a nice fire. Now it is going to lunch time he has to wash his hand with fresh crystal clear water near the garbage area to wash his hands from the dusty coals that he had to smash. He gets a sandwich, egg, peach, and steamed steak that his mum cooked for him. So then after checking the contents of his lunchbox he started getting to eat his lunch and get back home for sleep. He quickly goes and trows the ashes in the fire place. The his day starts over again and again.
Adam has just woken up at 8:00am in the morning and brushes his teeth and then gets dressed and ready for breakfast to start his great day at school. Then he gets in his car while his dad drives the car to his school while he waves goodbye to his dad while drives away to work. The teachers come out to take Adam inside the school. He gets to come do reading, writing, maths and reading. After that he goes back home to have dinner and sleep for 12 hours.
Good work on your writing Benjamin it is really really Good.
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